Elvis – seriously, I have to start looking ahead. This is much improved. You still have an issue with the Special 20th Anniversary Edition placement. Keep thinking. Masthead is still too large for the space in which it sits. I see some small diamond photos at bottom… maybe they could be enlarged and overlap the silhouette girl on right? No need for the angled element in bottom right – you really don’t need it. Keep working… it just gets better!
Elvis – seriously, I have to start looking ahead. This is much improved. You still have an issue with the Special 20th Anniversary Edition placement. Keep thinking. Masthead is still too large for the space in which it sits. I see some small diamond photos at bottom… maybe they could be enlarged and overlap the silhouette girl on right? No need for the angled element in bottom right – you really don’t need it. Keep working… it just gets better!
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