Elvis – this it becoming more refined, and the secondary elements that travel across the top left of the page are becoming more interesting. There is a saying “Less is More” and I think it pertains to this element. You have simplified it, which is good and I think it could work on the cover in this position possibly just fine. However, as I see it sitting on the following pages… I think it might be too much. So – keep this on the first page of the newsletter only – and allow us to see bits and pieces of it tucked into interesting places… but only to remind us of it’s primary use on the first page. Nice work – this is promising.
Elvis – this it becoming more refined, and the secondary elements that travel across the top left of the page are becoming more interesting. There is a saying “Less is More” and I think it pertains to this element. You have simplified it, which is good and I think it could work on the cover in this position possibly just fine. However, as I see it sitting on the following pages… I think it might be too much. So – keep this on the first page of the newsletter only – and allow us to see bits and pieces of it tucked into interesting places… but only to remind us of it’s primary use on the first page. Nice work – this is promising.
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