Eleni – this is well thought out, showing your good reasoning in your first page. Nice.
The masthead, with its 2 hands against the “mountain triangles”, works really well – as do the colors in your palette. All this makes sense… but I keep coming back to the name “Climb for Hope”. Because of the 2 hands, I wonder if “Reach for Hope” might make more sense. What do you think?
In terms of the layout for the Brief, you are actually missing a page, aren’t you? The last page should show your masthead design, and the 3rd page should hold your color mixes. So, please see the Projects Overview handout about this Brief, to make sure you have the sections complete, and in the right order.
Eleni, great job on your ideas for this design brief. I really enjoy what you thought of for the logo although i do agree with Coni on "reach for hope" possibly making a better name. The color palette is nice and neutral because when i see those colors together it kind of reminds me of a bank or more serious business, which I believe is what you were going for as your target audience. Over all, I really like what you've done to start your design brief.
Nice, I do agree with Coni Porter about changing the "Climb for Hope" to the "Reach for Hope", or something similar, it will give more sense to your logo, even knowing that the triangles on the back are meant to be mountain, and also the types around the logo can be more bold. But Over all great job, you had a great design view, like always .
Eleni – this is well thought out, showing your good reasoning in your first page. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThe masthead, with its 2 hands against the “mountain triangles”, works really well – as do the colors in your palette. All this makes sense… but I keep coming back to the name “Climb for Hope”. Because of the 2 hands, I wonder if “Reach for Hope” might make more sense. What do you think?
In terms of the layout for the Brief, you are actually missing a page, aren’t you? The last page should show your masthead design, and the 3rd page should hold your color mixes. So, please see the Projects Overview handout about this Brief, to make sure you have the sections complete, and in the right order.
Eleni, great job on your ideas for this design brief. I really enjoy what you thought of for the logo although i do agree with Coni on "reach for hope" possibly making a better name. The color palette is nice and neutral because when i see those colors together it kind of reminds me of a bank or more serious business, which I believe is what you were going for as your target audience. Over all, I really like what you've done to start your design brief.
ReplyDeleteNice, I do agree with Coni Porter about changing the "Climb for Hope" to the "Reach for Hope", or something similar, it will give more sense to your logo, even knowing that the triangles on the back are meant to be mountain, and also the types around the logo can be more bold. But Over all great job, you had a great design view, like always
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