Elvis – I enjoy the colors and shapes you work with. Things to thing about: The 960 grid is very much a symmetrically balanced designed, so I wonder why you haven’t centered the contact info at bottom – the layout is no longer balanced as is; The iPad layout is divided with a great color palette and inventively placed typography – I wonder if the amount of neg space below the top section might confuse us a bit as the word “resources:” suggests a list that doesn’t immediately follow. Consider using all CAPS for “Central Asia Institute”, which will push the lines of type around to help this last line fill out further (and avoid the widow)… and then add some leading to the paragraph; iPhone layout contains a typo in heading (use Dynamic spelling when typing into InDesign) and maybe a bit too much neg space above and below the central element with the photo.
Elvis – I enjoy the colors and shapes you work with. Things to thing about: The 960 grid is very much a symmetrically balanced designed, so I wonder why you haven’t centered the contact info at bottom – the layout is no longer balanced as is; The iPad layout is divided with a great color palette and inventively placed typography – I wonder if the amount of neg space below the top section might confuse us a bit as the word “resources:” suggests a list that doesn’t immediately follow. Consider using all CAPS for “Central Asia Institute”, which will push the lines of type around to help this last line fill out further (and avoid the widow)… and then add some leading to the paragraph; iPhone layout contains a typo in heading (use Dynamic spelling when typing into InDesign) and maybe a bit too much neg space above and below the central element with the photo.
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